RareLit: Short Story (Fifth Edition)

[Resoula]

#1. Untitled (No title provided)
http://mibpaste.com/KbNDDB

#2. The Costs of Love
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QxjneWpwHaChl7EOtzUp6eNySeepxYz1z4eywbFB4CU/edit?usp=sharing

[Recks]

Voted for da BB one because it was the only true 'Short Story'

#2 was waaaaaaay too long 

[Resoula]

Voted for da BB one because it was the only true 'Short Story'

#2 was waaaaaaay too long 

Actually a short story is most-usually categorized as any storytelling that is 7,500 words and under. #2 was under 7,500 words. It was in fact a short story, not "too long" by any meaning of the category. Before stating what a "true" short story is, it might be good to learn what one actually is first. Otherwise you are falsely critiquing somebody that has done no wrong. Take that into consideration please.

[eShades]

BeachBunny's story explains so much.... So I'mma stay far away from Trekker.

Both stories were interesting.